Seaside Living in HDRby ~LethArt

Photography / Urban & Rural / City Life

Resubmission of [link] . This is what I intended the image to look like before, but I didn't have HDR software until now. Tell my which you like more.

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Critique by $makepictures May 13, 2009, 7:43:33 PM

Looks like a still from one of those movies where something huge and terrible happens to an otherwise mundane part of life; like a volcano erupting under Los Angeles; an alien attack in an H.G. Wells remake with Tom Cruise; or maybe here a pollution storm overcoming a seaside resort. I am not sure what the story of the work is attempting to be and in art I always look for story first - - for the narrative in the piece.

I do like the HDR impact on the motion of the bus. I have not really been attracted to that much HDR although I have been frequently impressed with the technique. The way it deals with the motion is quite interesting.

The image is over-saturated when you get to the grass in the background. Isolating that portion of the image and making it less hot might greatly improve the impact of the bus.

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