That which cannot be seen by sight
One must learn to feel within the heart;
For in that realm the invisible becomes visible,
In that realm the lost become found:
True Love is but a teardrop away,
A silent scream away,
A head raise to Heaven away,
A heartbeat away:
This Love is a topsy-turvy and a helter-skelter,
This Love is the great unbound Wild,
The greatest adventure,
And this uplifting of the soul,
This fire of the spirit,
This unfettered freedom,
This grace,
This love,
Is my God.
This drew me in instantly. It presented an original thought and made me go, "What?" Thus, I read on, and eventually decided to write a critique.
Your use of imagery paints a beautiful portrait of 'This Love' and creates a vivid dance of the 'topsy-turvy' and 'wild' thing we call love -- and that is very difficult to do! Beautiful.
Technicalities;
-I think you meant 'sight' not 'site'.
-'A head raise to Heaven away -- I see what you are trying to say, but it is unclear and doesn't make sense.
Other than that, it is nothing short of a beautiful, well-crafted and thought provoking piece. Keep it up!
With Love,
Andrew
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